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2) I did not receive much constructive criticism on my previous post. However, I believe I spoke up a little more in my second elevator pitch, and was certainly more confident in the message I was delivering.
3) As I previously stated, I took a more confident approach to the elevator pitch. I delivered my information in a more informative & convincing manner.
Hey there Yehudy, I think your reflective comments were a nice touch and shows you're actually caring about the work. Your video was solid. I struggled getting the audio loud enough but I have to give your credit for dressing professional. Nice video.
ReplyDeleteHey Yehudy, it is great how you bring up statistics when opening your pitch because it motivates the costumer to become part of this movement, also the information you provided about how pollution it is damaging for life on earth. Explaining the outcome of what the purpose of this business is creates a good closing for the pitch, keep up the good work, with this video really shows how much you are invested in this and what you are trying to achieve.
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